#2
Someone here likes The Faceless?

Just a minor complaint about the notation, when you dot a note AND make it a triplet, it's the same as just a regular beat. For example, a dotted eighth triplet is just a straight eighth. No need for all the extras.

Anyway, nothing to complain about. Very Faceless-y and I LOVE The Faceless, so that's not a problem. Two thumbs up from the jew boy!

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#3
Very much like The Faceless, which is a good thing.

Good themes and sound, although the constant cymbal ride gets a bit annoying. 20 is great, and the theme there is good. 37-38 and similar sections transition too abruptly, so I would suggest changing something there to make it flow better. The reiteration of riffs again is good.

The section at 92 is great, and I like the dissonance there. The outro with the halo pad accompanying the guitar is also great.

Good material here, and I like how it's entirely triplets.

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#4
Sick shit bro, the drums for bar 1-4 threw me off completely, riff makes so much sense w/ the drums at bar 5, little things like that make me happy haha

I'm gonna learn this song tomorrow when I get some free time, I rarely learn things that people post on this site so kudos on that

Overall, great piece, I really enjoyed the drums overall which completely dictates the feel of a song and a lot of people forget that.

Riff at bar 44 has such a Dying Fetus + Faceless groove, I <3 it!

Bar 92, faceless to the max haha, I guess that's the feel you were going for.

Oh, and most of this can be written in 3/4 or 6/8 and in terms of playing to a click would make infinitely more sense, just my 2 cents.

Solid piece, 8/10. My only suggestion would be to not repeat parts and give it a more progressive flow where its riff after riff, I think it suits this song if it went down that road.

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Last edited by cptazad at Jun 21, 2011,