I didn't write this song, the guitarist of mah band did, I just thought I'd see what some other people thought of it (I think it's great, but then I would )

For some reason it won't let me upload a GP5 version of it, it's not even that long

For C4C I will gladly match any crit you give just drop me a link in your reply.

New Thing (1).gp4
Sounded good to me. And the 25/8 time signature is quite hazardous, but its prog so it fits great . Reminds me of my friends prog band stuff. Im not an expert in music but I hope this helped.