#1
Soo ive never done poetry before but i decided to try it and this is what i came up with

Love is a waterfall
Swift and unending
No breaks no binds
No unnecessary bending
It can grow to inspire
It can swallow you whole
It can take you down under
And never let you go
But now I've grown up
And I've finally learned
That love is a fire
and you're sure to get burned
#4
I agree with Leila that was a really nice piece. I really enjoyed the way you ended it, cause surely everyone who has been in love has felt it's burn as well. One line that I would try to work in a different way is "and never let you go." I like the idea of love capturing you forever but I think with some thought you could come up with a more creative way to say it. Other than that, bravo!