#1
I have a recording of the song that this goes with if anyone is interested. At this point, just looking for some feedback

Its an abstract ambient sort of thing. All the lyrics are read by the voice of a computer

Windows without light
Windows with no curtains
Windows that are open
Windows that don’t let air in
Windows that you look out
But not in
Stain glass windows
multi spectrum of colors
Windows that were

Walls that are
Walls that ensure safety
Walls that divide
Walls that cant be climbed
Walls with power
Walls of malice
Walls that collapse
Windows that aren’t tangible
Walls that aren’t thought
Brought back to humble origins
Brought back to humble origins
Leaving humble origins
#2
It's good for an ambient track, the one thing I might change is the second "brought back to humble origins." Maybe another word instead of humble.
BEWARE THE BANANA ARMY.

I SAY, I SAY, BEWARE THE BANANA ARMY.

They say when they finally attack, all the impostors will peel themselves. In order to tell if you have been assimilated, check for a zipper somewhere near your pelvis.