#2
I really enjoyed this. A lot of really good ideas in here, some if it is a bit core-ish for my taste, and some of the transitions were a bit off, namely at 0:44. Right now it sounds like a bit of a montage of riffs, but the individual parts are really good. Work on the structure.
#3
Quote by Tarbosh
I really enjoyed this. A lot of really good ideas in here, some if it is a bit core-ish for my taste, and some of the transitions were a bit off, namely at 0:44. Right now it sounds like a bit of a montage of riffs, but the individual parts are really good. Work on the structure.


I know right? I'm not into core much, I just randomly come up with these riffs all week and some tend to be out of my range of likes, but I still use them haha. Thanks, bro