This belongs in the Original Recordings forum.
I can only listen to so many breakdowns and "spoken word" vocals before I wanna puke.

I find Jennette McCurdy attractive, but Elizabeth Gillies and Debby Ryan much more so.

That's enough, Djent people. We get it.
I wish I could hear it better quality - the MP3 compression is crushing. Anyways, I like this! Very tight playing. Snare could be quite a bit louder with some reverb to it, to make it stand out a bit more. I dig the clean guitar tones! Vocals are good to, maybe a bit quiet at times. Overall a good 8/10 I'd say! Keep them good tracks coming.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1450194
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