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jeez, that was really good. note for note. very nice picking hand control, dude.
if you wanted to get nitpicky, i might say that the last arpeggio's (after the tremolo part) phrasing seemed off. take a look at that again. but again, thats extremely nitpicky.

take a look at this?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1452377
thanks!