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Thats just noise, from my point of view. Sure you have good chops, but you have no sense of melody

However; your soloing technique is dirty just like hendrix/hammet (early years) and also one thing you may want to look into is using a different kind of sound. All I heard was primarily just the minor pentaonic scale, which is cool, but learning other sounds helps your overall sound.

All in all, you got some good chops !

Rock on!