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http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/TheDistracted/music/all/play1010296

I wrote and recorded this song a while back, as a demo for the band I'm in, but never really came out with it looking for critiques, until now. So be honest with me, criticize me on anything regarding song, whether it's mixing (I feel the lead was too loud?), vocals, the song in general or whatever.

The lyrics are on a different computer, which has now broken down, but everything should be understandable except for the one part where I forgot my lyrics while recording in the second verse and didn't feel like redoing it: "You've moved on to bigger and better things."

As always, C4C.
Last edited by TheDistracted at Jun 20, 2011,