#2
Checked them out; I have to agree with the youtube comments however, timing is a little bit out at some places - but that can always be worked on!
You can see a lot of good techniques and I especially like the main riff you have going on, really catchy stuff. Could really develop into a great song!

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#3
You have an exceptionally 'light touch' on the gallop riffs. I notice this because it's the opposite of my heavy handed style. I might try to get that sound next time.

Writing riffs is fun, isn't it? Choose three of your best, writing linking sections and you'll practically have a song. I look forward to hearing it.

Check out a few of my riffs in this song, called Bludgeonizer.

http://soundcloud.com/jehannum/bludgeonizer