#1
Hello fellow UGers,

I just now finished a song that I kinda like, but I'm not 100% sure that it's good or not (I'm sure you folks have felt the same way at one point or another). It's called "Plasticine Rose", and it's at the top of my profile. I'd greatly appreciate anyone's thoughts on song structure, lyrics, instrumentation, or anything else you folks can think of.

Thanks in advance, and of course I'll happily C4C!

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/SchmifftyFive/
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#2
HERE WE GO!! Wow im lucky to be one of the first! CHUCKYHCUCKAHCUCKAHCO GOES THE GUITAR!!! You have a proud voice! That's great! I dont like "rest of the story" it ruins your flow. Maybe just THAT STORY!?! MAYBE, try it!

WOW EVERYTHING IS SPARKLING IN THIS SONG!! YAHOOO OO O O OO AND I like the percusssion. PRO cussion. The title is so luvly I might steal it and make a million dollars! Keep workin on this man you should be proud , I promise that someone will connect to this music!!

share da luv

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1452291
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Don't tell me what can be done, either.



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#3
Beautiful!

Well written, great recording quality and a great voice.

The vocals seemed a bit quiet at times,
but that is probably just my cheap headphones.

5 stars man.
Keep it up.