#2
It's good man. It's a unique kind of blend of metal/punk/classic rock. I like it! Production-wise... the drums sound a little muffled, not very defined, in some parts. And the solo guitar needs to be louder, because the rhythm guitars seem centre-stage throughout. In terms of song structure and flow... I can't really say much bad about it. The solo section could transition back into the main riff a little more interestingly, but that might be solved with the vocal track. I like how the guitar parts kind of overlap in some parts, making good use of stereo. Overall, very nice man! Keep it up and let us know when the EP's out!

Crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1451450
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#6
Very nice! The song is very well written, it goes on an epic journey. I like how raw everything still sounds, but somewhat polished at the same time. Sweet tone too. Eff yeah.
#7
Quote by insecticide
Very nice! The song is very well written, it goes on an epic journey. I like how raw everything still sounds, but somewhat polished at the same time. Sweet tone too. Eff yeah.

Haha thanks man! If you wanna like our Facebook page, we have a link on the main Youtube channel! Glad ya like it man! You have anything you want me to C4C for you?
#8
OK HERE WE GO!

WOW that guitar wants to KICK MY ASS!!! AND IT IS IT BROUGHT CRASH CYMBALS TO HELP! so far luvvin dat energy! I'm lookin for the message and the message is to have fun and be a rockstar about things. nice lil chord progression kickin, den dose drums breakin it down. OK BRING IT BACK! OH SHIT I THINK GUITAR SOLO COMIN IN!! Let see what happens after this dramatic bridge. GUITAR SOLO OF MEGAMANIAC PRO PORTIONS!! haha ok this was a lot of fun looking forward to the vocal parts! KEEP GOIN

share da luv, bruv!

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#9
Quote by nightwind
OK HERE WE GO!

WOW that guitar wants to KICK MY ASS!!! AND IT IS IT BROUGHT CRASH CYMBALS TO HELP! so far luvvin dat energy! I'm lookin for the message and the message is to have fun and be a rockstar about things. nice lil chord progression kickin, den dose drums breakin it down. OK BRING IT BACK! OH SHIT I THINK GUITAR SOLO COMIN IN!! Let see what happens after this dramatic bridge. GUITAR SOLO OF MEGAMANIAC PRO PORTIONS!! haha ok this was a lot of fun looking forward to the vocal parts! KEEP GOIN

share da luv, bruv!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1452291&highlight=real+good+kids


Hahaha awesome man I'm glad you liked it! Sorry it took soo long for the C4C I was outta town.

C4C time: Sounded good man! Keep up the good work. It's kinda silly but I still liked it. And im not a big rap fan. Keep spittin them rhymes!
#10
I came in hear expecting a pop punk/hardcore song. This was very different than what I was expecting to hear, in a good way! It sounded pretty awesome and I could definitely picture some good catchy vocals over top of it.

I felt the guitars were a bit too harshly distorted, but other than that the mix sounded good. Would be interested to hear this with vocals

C4C:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1456271
#12
I really liked this!!! It was great. I really like the way the rhythm guitars are mixed. Possibly a tiny bit too much distortion there but personally, I like the way it sounds. I think the drums and solo guitar need some more presence in the track. In terms of genre or heaviness or whatever you want to call it. It reminded me of Bullet for My Valentine (and I mean that as a compliment. I personally really like that genre) and if you're going for "pop-metal" then I think that was probably a good choice. I really like the pace of the rhythm guitar. It has a nice metal-core feel to it.
I'm looking forward to hearing how the vocals will sound.

Also, could you have a listen to my track and give a few crits? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1456267
#13
Quote by Loffle Monster.
Really awesome, it's not too metal, it's not too light either. The vocals can really make it or break it, depending on what kind of sound youre going for. Is it going to be sung/grunted/screamed?

Thanks I'm glad u like it! As for the vocals its gonna be sung with a melodic feel, that you might find in a Gaga song but at the same time, it'll flow. We're still working on that and hopefully it works out nicely.
#14
XD,
Audio quality is very good for youtube.... or for anything actually! I like the guitar riffs & playing! Drums sound quite good too. Yep, this song needs some good vocals. Electric bass playing seems fine, can't hear it that well over the guitars (for the most part) though. Quite good so far! Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1456385
#15
@Androidkaita and adodin and aaron

Thank u both glad u like it! There are more songs on that Youtube channel as well as a link to our Facebook fan page if u wanna check them out.
Currently i dont have internet to my desktop Im using my PSP and i cant check them out now but i will PM both of you your C4Cs when i get it back. Promise!
Last edited by XanderDylan at Jun 30, 2011,
#17
Quote by Guitar Hack
Sounds good. Not too much to take issue with. The vocals will make or break this song. Wouldn't change a thing.

Would you mind Critiquing "Thinking of You?"

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1456615


@Guitar Hack

Just C4C'd on your post!

@aaron and androidkata and adonin

I'm c4c'ing on your posts right now!
Last edited by XanderDylan at Jul 1, 2011,