#1
This is the first piece I've posted here. Though I have written a lot of poetry, this is my first song. I wrote it in only a few minutes. What do you peop's think?

I'm too lazy
Get a job

Let me inside

I'm too dirty
Wash your hair

Let me inside

I'm a liar
Lose the mask

Let me inside
#2
Uh... Yeah......

Is there more to that? and by more I mean a verse? Is that a chorus or is there a chorus?

That seems a little..... short (couldn't find another word) to be a song.
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