#1
I would rather be violated.
Than never touched at all.
I just sit on the shelf,
In back, close to the wall.
The cover of this book
Does not grab you at all.
It’s not in any way exciting
I‘ve no strength to enthrall.

I’m plain and I’m drab,
I want to shock and appall.
You’ve ignored me so long
That I’d take even your gall.
I’m just not that interesting,
And that’s my downfall.
I know what I’m worth,
And that worth is quite small.

Use me if you have to,
Break me if you must.
I’m fine with abuse,
At least I’ve been touched.
Neglect’s left me shivering,
At least the fire is warm.
I’d rather be drenched
Than stay out of the storm.

And if you ruin me
And it can’t be undone
I’ll be fine if you smile
And say “Damn, that was fun”
Any value I have
Is what I’m worth to you.
I’m fine with being spent
As long as it’s by you.

Use me if you have to,
Break me if you must.
I’m fine with abuse,
At least I’ve been touched.
Neglect’s left me shivering,
At least the fire is warm.
I’d rather be drenched
Than stay out of the storm.
#2
What i see here is a gay guy who wants to be raped.

judments apart, IMO the lyrics are so so.
#3
...I'm kind of offended by the first statement. Not sure if you meant it that way.

If you could elaborate on "so so" it would be a lot more helpful to me in improving my writing.
#4
I think this is good. It doesn't use to many complicated phrases, it just tells the reader straight whats happening to him/her. Although I dunno where that other person got the idea of a gay guy... (not sure if it is about a gay person)
#5
It's not. Some of my best friends are gay, so it's not that part that offended me. It's personal material, though, so maybe I'm not so much offended as just kind of shocked that it could be read that way.

Thanks for the critique!