#1
Sorry for the harshly loud outside noise... my webcam sucks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SpRza6eB3RE

New acoustic/indie song/project i am starting.
I know the vocals arnt clean, but how does it sound?
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#3
Of course fine sir!
Thanks, yea the lyrics sometimes dont fit with the melody i have in mind, so i mess up :/
But thanks!
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#4
Sounds like a great song, I love the variety of vocal melodies. They do need a lil cleaning up though, some of the lyrics don't let the melody flow nicely, if you know what I mean. I can definitely hear that you can sing, just needs a lil practice to iron out the pitchyness at some points. I love the chorus though. I think the songs a keeper, just keep practicing it, and work out the flow of the lyrics a little bit and I think you'll be set. One other note, nice job with creating a lil melody with the fingerpicking, it's simple and fits nicely with the song, also I'm a sucker for any chord melodies.

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#5
Oh thank you sir
Yes i need to fit the words better into the verse melody at times, but i am in love with how explosive that chorus could be with the right mixing and such!
Thanks
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He's just trying to protect our innocence.


Yes i am
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Your flirting powers are incredible.



Gear:
Schecter S1 Elite Black Cherry (Soapbar Neck, Invader Bridge)
Schecter Banshee
Orange Dual Terror
Boss CE-5
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