#2
First of all, nice taste in shirts, Protest The Hero ftw.

First of all, I think the guitar playing suits the song and genre well, but without trying to be harsh, I feel your vocals would work better, with a little more power and grit, especially in this style of acoustic punk. Just push your vocals a little more, and I think it'll sound a lot better, but singing is a personal thing, so its just my opinion.

Good job overall, if you wanted to return the crit, I have plenty of covers in my profile, the most recent of which is this one, by City and Colour.....http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Stud_Muffin/music/play1016220
#3
Thanks man will do!

Personally I hate my voice, which is why I don't like to push it out. I'll remember that for next time though. And yes protest the hero.. next month I'm seeing them with Metallica i'm so pumped.
#4
Its the same for me, I don't like my voice at all, but pushing it a bit, for those rougher round the edges songs makes them sound a lot more genuine and powerful.