I'm not an easy sell with this kind of thing, but I still loved it. For guitar in the main riff thing instead of muted strings on the 3rd beat, you could try making it a chord or change the chord and make a chord progression, and maybe not right on the beat maybe a 16th before or after. Like I said I really liked it, it was like Green Day mixed with Oasis. You had a lot of extra tracks on there you didn't use, you should delete those.

C4C ? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1453717
you're a stone fox
That's a solid piece. Quite different to the metalcore stuff
Initially I didn't like the lyrics, but I think it was somewhere through the bridge that I found myself reminiscing. It was really quite powerful, which was interesting because there was nothing that special about the lyrics, but they were effective. Overall I really liked it, well done.
RIP Gooze