Hey, I'm hoping to get some crits on a track I uploaded just now called "Cross My", it's just an acoustic version at the moment and in my head it's a little more epic with a full band and stuff, but yeah anyway..

It's here: http://www.reverbnation.com/the2029

C4C as always!
Well I wanted the style to be the same, just with some bass/drums/electric guitar entering later on, I wanted it to stay acoustic for about the first half of the song though, only start going electric and full band towards the end, in my head the outro is alot more epic but oh well

nice panning and tremming.

Oh a vocal is very dominating!! It's nice how acapella ish it feels . I dont know if that was your INTENTION but if it was your INTENTION is very good! OH STRUM the panned chords. People will critique you for the POPPED P , but who cares it doesn't matter. LYRICALLY I think you are a little afraid of BEING YOURSELF and imitating what you really like. THIS IS NOT BAD, but you should do something every song that you think people WILL NOT LIKE!! TO GROW!

Share da luv bruv!

Don't tell me what can not be done

Don't tell me what can be done, either.

I love you all no matter what.