#2
I think you have a good start here. i really like the chord progression and the delay on the guitar. My favorite part is around 1:39, I think if after a drum fill like that one you could go into a chorus part, with the riff at that part sped up a little and some big chords behind it. This could be great with a really nice vocal melody, but you could always play it on guitar or synth if you want to keep it instrumental. Overall, you have a good start, keep developing it and you could end up with a pretty good song.

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#3
OK here we go!! THANK YOU for presenting this song.

VERY nice guitar sounds and drums I feel like im back at high school FEELING INTROSPECTIVE because the girl I am with is not sure if she wants to stay with me but im thinking of positive things like FRIENDS I HAVE TO LEAN ON. I have an IM GOING TO BE OK ATTITUDE!!

the really dry drumfill is great! When you start rippin dem blues out, turn up the guitar a bit! If you listen we can hear those RHYTHM CHORD HITS are VERY loud compared.

It MIGHT be nice with words, do you not sing because you think you have a bad voice ? please sing!!! = } great ending.


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#4
Quote by valvetronix63
I think you have a good start here. i really like the chord progression and the delay on the guitar. My favorite part is around 1:39, I think if after a drum fill like that one you could go into a chorus part, with the riff at that part sped up a little and some big chords behind it. This could be great with a really nice vocal melody, but you could always play it on guitar or synth if you want to keep it instrumental. Overall, you have a good start, keep developing it and you could end up with a pretty good song.

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Thanks for the critique I don't know, if I do something more with it, probably I leave it as it is, but thanks for advice

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Quote by nightwind
OK here we go!! THANK YOU for presenting this song.

VERY nice guitar sounds and drums I feel like im back at high school FEELING INTROSPECTIVE because the girl I am with is not sure if she wants to stay with me but im thinking of positive things like FRIENDS I HAVE TO LEAN ON. I have an IM GOING TO BE OK ATTITUDE!!

the really dry drumfill is great! When you start rippin dem blues out, turn up the guitar a bit! If you listen we can hear those RHYTHM CHORD HITS are VERY loud compared.

It MIGHT be nice with words, do you not sing because you think you have a bad voice ? please sing!!! = } great ending.


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Thanks Well I just can't sing, besides English is not my first language, so my pronunciation is not perfect, and if I sang, I would prefer to sing in English. Well at least some things sounds better in it, it's not like there was something wrong with Polish. :P As for the song itself, at the first time I wanted to do some ballad, though I decided it's not good enough for singing, so I made it short instrumental song

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#5
Pretty cool! The progression has a nice feel to it. I like your use of delay, it's tasteful. The little set of riffs and stuff around 1:05 is very nice too. I would bring the lead guitar out a bit more in the mix but other than that it's great.

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#6
Quote by Artemis Entreri
Pretty cool! The progression has a nice feel to it. I like your use of delay, it's tasteful. The little set of riffs and stuff around 1:05 is very nice too. I would bring the lead guitar out a bit more in the mix but other than that it's great.

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#7
Thanks for your Review buddy! First thing first, your lead tone sounds great. Your Phrasing ideas come across very catchy and melodic. The only non positive thing I have to say is the song gets kinda bland at a certain point, maybe try adding a bit more "punch" to a certain part of it to give it a new feel. Great stuff bro!
#8
Quote by Zonzin
Thanks for your Review buddy! First thing first, your lead tone sounds great. Your Phrasing ideas come across very catchy and melodic. The only non positive thing I have to say is the song gets kinda bland at a certain point, maybe try adding a bit more "punch" to a certain part of it to give it a new feel. Great stuff bro!


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#9
Wow man, I really like the chord progression you use in this song. Also some really nice, creative lead work you put on top of it. My kind of shit right here.
#11
Dude straight off, the chord progression was a really well thought out one. Great job. The lead tone is amazing too, the delay is orgasmic. I loved the song when the song got a bit more intense, a bit heavy if you will. Your phrasing, again, is beautiful. It's catchy and well done. I have no critiques for this piece just praise GOOD JOB BRO!!! PM me when you have more stuff, I'd love to hear more Thanks again for the crit!!
#12
Quote by inyourgirlagain
Dude straight off, the chord progression was a really well thought out one. Great job. The lead tone is amazing too, the delay is orgasmic. I loved the song when the song got a bit more intense, a bit heavy if you will. Your phrasing, again, is beautiful. It's catchy and well done. I have no critiques for this piece just praise GOOD JOB BRO!!! PM me when you have more stuff, I'd love to hear more Thanks again for the crit!!


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#13
Great impro

There's alot of feeling in your playing, 01.10 - 01.25 sounded very nice, good job on that part! My only advice would be to maybe speed it up abit at the end, other then that its a great song!
#14
Quote by vismbr
Great impro

There's alot of feeling in your playing, 01.10 - 01.25 sounded very nice, good job on that part! My only advice would be to maybe speed it up abit at the end, other then that its a great song!


Thanks for the review
#17
Quote by aaron aardvark
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Audio quality is good. Guitar playing is mostly tight. I like the chords you are playing for the most part. Lead guitar is nice! Sounds good overall! Please review my music at this link:

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Quote by Spencer_Rock825
it's nice steady rythym very smooth. Not my style honestly though. Everything was recorded perfectly it just didnt have that it factor for me. Keep up the good work though

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#18
I like the ambience and mood that the tune creates...
I would definitely use it for a Videogame soundtrack...

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