#1
Hello guys, just looking for some feedback on a track i've started on. The guitar needs tightening up a bit and the drumming is very basic at the mo but i'd just like some constructive feedback/responses please

The song is called The Vacuum, it's on my profile http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Big_Rat/

Cheers!
Gear:

  • ESP LTD SC 207
  • Washburn X200 PRO E
  • Squier Strat (in bits LOL)
  • Line 6 Toneport ux1
Last edited by Big_Rat at Jun 28, 2011,
#2
That intro thing is a bit long, you could do something to it to make it more interesting, like some effects over it. I like the riffs though, but I think you should make some lead parts over them to keep things interesting. And I'm no drummer, but yeah, the drums are a bit plain. Pretty cool though.
#3
The intro isn't too long in my opinion. I might do a lead part over it though. Cheers for the feedback though Gonna improve the drums next .
Gear:

  • ESP LTD SC 207
  • Washburn X200 PRO E
  • Squier Strat (in bits LOL)
  • Line 6 Toneport ux1