That's more of some kind of post-prog-math-pop-core than metal, just doesn't have the right feel. And when you go to record for realsies I'd take a look at how you're getting your tone, you've got this treble fuzz that is just unpleasant to the ears
I really enjoyed listening to your first two songs. My only complaint is the intro of Harboring Resentment is a little muddled up since you've got two different guitar tracks playing in both ears. Overall, though, keep it up; I really dig you guys.