This is one of my old bands songs but now that I have a new band I'm trying to work out which direction I should take it in so I would particularly appreciate feedback on the style and for want of a better word 'feel' of the song (though general feedback more than welcome!)

So tell me what you think


and as always C4C!

Last edited by weorge at Jun 30, 2011,
Quote by aaron aardvark
Guitar playing could be tighter at times, but I like most of the songwriting/riffs. Singing is good, has a 60's feel, with all of that reverb. Overall audio quality is good. Pretty trippy! Please review my music at this link:


lol cheers, I was already on there posting a comment and when i was finished i found you had already reviewed my music!
Not bad. Song structure is nice, the riff around 0:30 sounds kind of weird to me though. The song seems to go out of time at a few points. Mixing wise the vocals should go up in the mix, because right now they're kinda buried behind everything else. Otherwise, cool song.

I don't have anything for C4C at the moment but I figured I'd say something anyway
like it very much. I really love that wierd guitar thing at 0:41. Its a really nice effect. A lot of the main riff feels a bit too repetative for me. Also the singing should come out a little bit more (not too much though, or it will ruin the effect) and some guitar parts are a bit sloppy and could be tightend up..

Also, I really liked the guitar solo, although there are parts where a bit more vibrato could be added..

too much vocal reverb, the vocals are really pitchy. The timing isn't good on the whole track. You should always play to a click track, it makes thinks much easier. I'm also not a fan of the melody, but the more you do this, the better you will get.

can you comment on my thread?


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