#1
Here's a simple little blues song. Comments would be appreciated!

woke up this morning
didn't get much sleep last night
woke up this morning
bright lights outside
and another one of these late nights
is gonna leave me dead

that big old moon was staring in my window
staring right at me
that big red moon was staring in my window
just wouldn't let me be
and another one of these late nights
is gonna leave me dead

i know i'm going to lose my mind
if i don't get some sleep
but there's a light out there
and it's calling out to me
and another one of these late nights
is gonna leave me dead
#3
Thanks, it didn't take long to write. The music's all finished, it's got quite a jazzy riff but it's mostly 12 bar blues
#5
I like this! I like the flow and the rhyme scheme. You outline this as a blues song, which is great. But i feel if you made this a little longer it could create a good rock song.

What I mean by rock song is kind of a "bon Jovi" style song with the last lines shouted out followed by a catchy riff!

That might not be your cup of tea but those lyrics would suit it, and suit it well!
#6
Thanks! It is quite rocky as well, it's been arranged for a full band and stuff. It's very energetic, which works well on stage