#1
The Things You’ll Never Know-

Restless again, I’m frayed to my ends
While you keep pulling out all that’s left of me
For all to see
Sucking it out of me like a leech
I’ve concentrated on this moment happening
So many times, I cant believe I’m wavering
Check my guts, so I’m not the fool again
The things you’ll never know, begin

There will be time to rest when I’ve passed
After the longest night the sun will rise at last

Sleepless tonight, out with the lights
Shrug it off like alls all right
In me and how I’ll be
Chaining me down, lock and key
We’ve talked about the future and how it’s supposed to be
Picked all the places safe enough to see
The image in your head of what I’m meant to be
The things you’ll never know, complete me

There will be time to rest when I’ve passed
After the longest night the sun will rise at last
#2
you have talent mate, and also a knack. are you new to UG? i am and didnt like sharing the one song i posted on here. but thats pretty good
#3
I can honestly say I really like this. There is so many lines here that I wish I had come up with.

This could be a fantastic song with the right music, and I'd love to hear it once completed with music, so please try and record.

Lines I like the most are:

Restless again, I’m frayed to my ends
While you keep pulling out all that’s left of me

I’ve concentrated on this moment happening
So many times, I cant believe I’m wavering

There will be time to rest when I’ve passed
After the longest night the sun will rise at last

The image in your head of what I’m meant to be
The things you’ll never know, complete me
#4
Hey, Thanks a lot!

I've been coming to UG for a while now, but i post rather infrequently. I'm currently working on re-recording vocals and guitars, and mixing the demo my band has been working on of this song. It's coming out great so far! As soon as its decent enough to show i'll get it up here.

If you wanted to know what i feel the song is about, while i do think people can interpret it however they want, its mostly about dealing the the expectations of those around you while your still trying to figure out what you want to do with your life.

I'll have a new one up tomorrow!

Thanks again woodery and Frontman
#5
That is a good expression and theme of it! Also a good song as well.