#1
Suicide of pride

He starts with wads of cash
Twist ties and little baggies
Takes off his jacket and starts on his adventure
Pulls his zipper and takes a look inside
Rips the Velcro and gets a grasp
Places the tiny prong on the plunger
Flips his zip and lets it rip
His bent spoon bubbles
Pierces the flesh with his escape
Pressurized shots recoil
Now it’s gone
The deed is done
He backtracks until he is out the door
Stumbles to the engine and turns his world on
Lucidity flows through his hair
The walls of nothing start to close in
Claustrophobia
A new found fear
He pushes them away
But no…it’s too late
The walls that were never there
Introduce him to the world without life
The people gather round
They talk amongst themselves as they deconstruct with stares
…”just another junkie…who the **** cares”
#2
I enjoyed it. Very descriptive and enticing. I liked the ending, it was powerful. One note though, "Suicide of Pride" isn't as good as Pride's Suicide, in my opinion.
BEWARE THE BANANA ARMY.

I SAY, I SAY, BEWARE THE BANANA ARMY.

They say when they finally attack, all the impostors will peel themselves. In order to tell if you have been assimilated, check for a zipper somewhere near your pelvis.