The whole song is quiet man, gotta pump up the master track volume or something.

The vocals are different, which is cool, the guitar work is pretty nice, the bass needs to be jacked up tonnes, can only really hear it during the guitar solo.

The drums are sick, the mix definitely needs to be louder though man.

The actual melodies of the song are cool, the chorus is catchy enough, and the verses aren't too bad, nice guitar solo, didn't feel forced or anything.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1457000