This is real cool, i like the feel of it. You plan to make it any longer, or just leavin it like this? I could see it going somewhere further for sure, but its still cool as it is! Maybe to a real minor type progression and back etc. I really liked the part around :31. Don't really have any negatives for you, was real crisply played from what I could tell! If you get a minute, https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1457339 mesasetting2. Its rough yet, i just kinda threw it together this morning, been workin on it a lil since. thanks!