Havent posted in a while and I havent gotten any drum or bass tracks for this yet but I just wanted to get something up here. I started out trying to do a After the Burial type song (the intro was heavily influenced by the song Aspirations) but it turned out a lot less djenty than I envisioned
Before the Burial.gp5
4/8 + 5/8 + 5/8 + 2/8= 16/8 = 2 bars of 4/4
Not as interesting when you write it that way is it?
Also I think the song would just be a lot nicer to look at if you wrote it all at double the tempo with 8th notes instead of 16th notes so instead of having bars of 3/8 they'd be bars of 6/8 or 3/4 which is just a lot more conventional and makes more sense to look at.

What's there sounds good but I don't really like giving a proper crit without drums and bass so I'll wait until they appear because it's hard to properly appreciate the song without those fundamental aspects.
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Last edited by frankibo at Jul 3, 2011,