This was something I was just messing with and decided to turn it into a song. The bass is a little off in the break which sucks as I though it was fine when I recorded it. Other than that I'm pretty happy but I'd love some ideas or critique on the production/structure/playing.

On my profile:http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/stephen_rettie/

Thanks! And of course C4C, leave a linky.
Quote by Evil_Magician
I'd suggest fattening the drums and to avoid using the hi-hat so much and use a ride instead.
For this type of thing!

You should also pan the guitars harder to make them sound bigger!
Also slap on some more reverb etc. on lead parts!

This could be something with the right mix!

C4C https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1456774 ?

Awesome advice dude thank you. Relistening to it I do find the high hat a little distracting and I need to pan the guitars for sure.

Edit: I have already critted your song so I took a look at your other songs.
Last edited by stephen_rettie at Jul 3, 2011,