#1
Hey Guys,

I was a bit down this evening, so I just grabbed my guitar and started playing.

This is the result:

http://soundcloud.com/timosomers/work-in-progress-ballad-1take

I am happy with the result because it tells what I felt.

I would love to know what you think about it!
Guitarist for: Delain, Arrow Haze, Vengeance, Tri-Head and others.

Official Endorser/Clinicer of:

Aristides Guitars
#2
couldent get pink floyd outa my head when during the starting, very nice man
#3
Thanks man!!
Guitarist for: Delain, Arrow Haze, Vengeance, Tri-Head and others.

Official Endorser/Clinicer of:

Aristides Guitars
#4
I can really hear the Gary Moore influence.

Good guitar tone, and I like the simplicity of the soloing. Nothing wrong from a performance perspective, either.

Not a fan of the bass or drum sounds, but you can work on them. Bass is also too loud by a little bit.

It's a little cheesy 80's for my liking in general, but you've done a good job on the guitar and the general progression/arrangement.
#5
Shit man, I'm impressed with your soloing style bro. I have no critiques for this except that just make the soloing a bit smoother but take my advice with a grain of sand because the way you play it may mean something else to you than it does to me. I really like your tone and everything, great job!!

Here's some of my stuff if you'd like to check it out: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1457740
#6
Thanks alot for the feedback dudes, means alot!
Ill check your stuff out tomorrow ! (With sensible speakers)
Guitarist for: Delain, Arrow Haze, Vengeance, Tri-Head and others.

Official Endorser/Clinicer of:

Aristides Guitars