#1
Malibu + Broccoli.

Malibu has a very ambitious vocal line, I realise I don't quite hit the notes haha.

But apart from that, I'd like to hear ways people think I could improve, or if they actually like the songs at all?

Mucho thanks,

Jam.
#2
This belongs in the original recordings thread.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=51


If you want us to crit the lyrics, then you should write the lyrics in a thread and post it.
But for now, I'm reporting this so it can be moved, or closed.
If it's closed, basically just copy and paste this thread and re-post it in the original recordings thread.

*reported* No offense to you, dude. Just wrong forum.
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