Malibu + Broccoli.

Malibu has a very ambitious vocal line, I realise I don't quite hit the notes haha.

But apart from that, I'd like to hear ways people think I could improve, or if they actually like the songs at all?

Mucho thanks,

This belongs in the original recordings thread.

If you want us to crit the lyrics, then you should write the lyrics in a thread and post it.
But for now, I'm reporting this so it can be moved, or closed.
If it's closed, basically just copy and paste this thread and re-post it in the original recordings thread.

*reported* No offense to you, dude. Just wrong forum.
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