#1
I worked pretty hard on this track focussing on keeping it interesting all the way through and just making it a real quality track that i can be proud of.

What does it sound like? I guess a combination of At The Gates sort of riffing and In Flames style melodies, but I tried to make it sound original. What do you think? C4C just post a link

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http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/crushingmetal/music/all/play1019752
#2
that really nice, i like the awesome riffs but is it just me or solos sound out of tune?
#3
If it wasnt for the shitty drum program, this song would be even better then it already is.

I love the As I lay dying style riffs after the intro. Guitars sounds great, really no downsides except for that the terrible drums. The clean part is a little random though, some parts sound a little out of place. AND you could work on tuning your guitar a little better. The riffs are very nice though. There really is no structure, but thats alright it still sounds good. You have a nice amount melodic harmonized riffs but its also balanced out with solos and thrashy riffs. Nice work.

Would you mind checking out my song and giving it a review? its not even closed to finished yet, but i decided to upload it anyways.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1458294
#4
Lead and Solo work, the guitar sounds a bit out of tune compared to the rhythm guitars. Also, the drums could make this a much better song. Look into EZDrummer if you can, or Steven Slate Drums for affordable and great sounding drums. The structure is a bit structureless in a way but I like that about it. The clean part I won't say is random, it didn't catch me off guard too much - I think it will depend on how vocals are structured before that.

Pretty good song, main thing just being the slight tuning issue, and drums. Other than that its pretty solid.
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#6
The writing is pretty damn good. Your riffs are really catchy and interesting. Some of the guitar tracks sounded out of tune, and the drums aren't great, I mean the drum lines you wrote are sick, but only if you had EZdrummer or Superior Drummer this song would sound 100x better. Great riffs and a nice composition, but the recording quality dragged this great piece of music down.

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