#1
Going for a more indie Arctic Monkeys kind of sound with this one, like I said it's not finished, I'm thinking of another verse at the start, just wanted some crit thanks

V1
Look, the pretty little hopes and dreams,
giving head to the money
living life with the sunny side up,
what a handsome little sight she makes,
preposessing all the spotlights
hypnotic in the moonlight oh

C
With her eyes, searching the room again
for a sign, of somebody listening
something kind, to stop her shivering oh
to keep her from imagining
the eyes, oh, watchin her sing again
or the lies, filling the scene again
and the lights, draining her face one time
but she really doesnt mind

V2
What a pretty little sight she was,
now shes hanging on to her regrets
a 20 pack of cigarettes oh,
What a stunnin little girl she was,
now shes knocking back an innocent
whiskey with an ignorant mind

C
on the eyes, watchin her sing again
on the lies, filling the scene again
on the lights, draining her face one time
but she really doesnt mind, oh
in her mind, shes roaming the street again
for a sign, of somebody listening
something kind, to stop her shivering oh
Last edited by pbuckley18 at Jul 6, 2011,