#1
Words Always Written Just To You

Mmmmmmm mmmmmmmmm
Words always written
Just to you
mmmmmmmm mnmmmmm


Verse1
Can’t you see
This is not
What I wanted
Can’t you see
That I just can’t
Live like this
It feels like
A black cloud is following me
Or so it seems
We just shouldn’t be together

Chorus
I’m just
Going to run
Gonna go hide away in the farthest spot of my room
A pen and the notebook you gave me
This letter I’m writing
It’s addressed to you
It will contain word
Always written just to you

ohhhh ohhhhh

Verse2
Why does it seem
Like the world has been spinning so quickly lately
Your heart turned to a cold stone
While mine was left to stop beating
Your pains hurting me like a hundred knives
After you saying
You hated me
For ever saying hi

Chorus
I’m just
Going to run
Gonna go hide away in the farthest spot of my room
A pen and the notebook you gave me
This letter I’m writing
It’s addressed to you
It will contain word
Always written just to you

Verse 3
Question is
What did I do
How could you ever hate me
For saying hello to you?
Now you’ve broken my heart and I
I just can’t breathe anymore

Chorus
I’m just
Going to run
Gonna go hide away in the farthest spot of my room
A pen and the notebook you gave me
This letter I’m writing
It’s addressed to you
It will contain word
Always written just to you

Bridge
Too bad I’m only human
I can’t change the past
Now I know
Loving you
I shouldn’t have gone through

Chorus
I’m just
Going to run
Gonna go hide away in the farthest spot of my room
A pen and the notebook you gave me
This letter I’m writing
It’s addressed to you
It will contain word
Always written just to you

Verse 4
As this letter comes to close
all I can think of
Are the times we spent together
Those happy times
That made me scream of terror
So now I’m
Burning this letter
After all,
These are words I won’t remember because
They’ll always be written just to you.


One day

I realize that this song is missing Verse 4. Just a new writing idea. I wrote this song quickly so if it's bad, I just wanted to post it to see what others thought. I don't think it's one of my best.


Verse 1
All our hard work
It’s not going to be useless now
We’re entering the world
The world of High School
These are the years
The years we’ll always remember

Chorus
Let’s make this school into a song
Let’s make the world dance
Dance to the tune of us
Our song
The memories we make
They’ll get turned into a movie
One day

Verse 2
This is the time
Everything will change
We will always have our ups and downs
But, no matter what
We’re still going to be
Best Friends Forever
You’ll be my matrion of honor
And then the next bride
But first,
Let’s party hard and

Chorus
Let’s make this school into a song
Let’s make the world dance
Dance to the tune of us
Our song
The memories we make
They’ll get turned into a movie
One day

Verse 3
Here we go
Here comes the fun and the tragedies too
I hate my teachers but
I still have you
my friends who will go through
All this hell too
Now let’s make this happen
We’re going through the doors
Into our new school
Come on

Chorus
Let’s make this school into a song
Let’s make the world dance
Dance to the tune of us
Our song
The memories we make
They’ll get turned into a movie
One day

Bridge
Now remember this day
The faces you’ve seen
Walk out of school of the last day
Thinking of how things used to be
We’re going off the college now
thinking about the past
All the fun in high school
The memories we had
Now let’s walk this story again

Chorus
Let’s make this school into a song
Let’s make the world dance
Dance to the tune of us
Our song
The memories we make
They’ll get turned into a movie
One day

One day you’ll realize that I was never wrong


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ALWAYS♥
MissyBeee123
#2
After reading these and your previous songs I can start to see the style of your writing, and like others when I read your songs I do get a sense they could be songs sang by taylor swift.

Her lyrics can often be quite literal, and she sings about similar topics. The bonus to this is I like taylor swift and therefore I enjoy reading your music.

Words Always Written Just To You

Of the 2 songs this is my favourite. This could definitely be a taylor swift song (sorry to re-iterate the likeness) and I feel that it could be recorded and released as it is, as long as it has the right music.

These lyrics although quite literal go really well together. I would like to hear how this one goes, so please look into maybe making a simple/scratchy demo.

One day

As I mentioned above, "Words Always Written Just To You" is my favourite of the two.

This is because although this song is good, it just feels a little to "young".

I know you are young yourself, but it seems like this is sang or aimed at an even younger audience, like upto early teens just moving to high school

Therefore I feel we've gone from taylor swift to hannah montana.

Its a good solid song, there isn't any real issues with what you've written. I just feel if your writing about bestfriends you could have gone a different way.
#3
Thank you haha I acctually love Taylor Swift, shes definetly up there on my list of idols. So, I take the comparison as a compliment acctually. Hannah Montana, not so much though. So I will have to work on that. Maybe I will make a small demo of the first song. It'd be something new for me.


Thanks again for the feedback