#1
Out of all the leaves
and every branch I've seen
i hope i can count on you
When the seasons change,
and with every step i take
i hope that you can tell the truth,

I hope your heart is what i feel
please for once let this be real

Leaves are unstable,
branches will break,
roots keep together,
they never cave,
so tell me if you are able
to carry this through to the end
i dont wanna be alone
dont make me pretend
it's just a dream

All the faces pass me by
leaving traces of the times
calibrate the colors of your life
and you say you're happy now
so pack your bags lets leave this town
would you stick your stake in the ground?

I hope your heart is what i feel
please for once let this be real

Leaves are unstable,
branches will break,
roots keep it together,
they never cave,
so tell me if you are able
to carry this through to the end
i dont wanna be alone
dont make me pretend
it's just a dream
#2
I can see myself singing in this real life. I'ma big fan of the chorus
#3
When reading peoples lyrics I often try and visualise myself performing the song. Like ickayR above I to can see myself performing this and it getting a good reaction

The chorus especially, as it flows really well.

Am I concerned about the extensive reference to trees???...a little
Overall does it matter???.....No not really

Well done on writing a good song, especially a good chorus.
#4
Thank you both, very much. The tree refrence is elongated, but it has it's purpose haha. thanks for the feedback, means a lot to me.

And then; The chord prog is pretty simple E B F# Abm During the verses and Chorus and E F# on the pre-chor.