#1
The words that dance across your lips and in my head,
They play a song of which the depths of my soul is fed.
The way you look at me and the twinkle of your eye,
In my mind i know that i am one lucky guy.

Stand by me, i will hold you close with such emotion,
We will see, the strength we share and this attraction.
Stand by me, i will hold you close with such emotion,
Never leave, one touch can start a chain reaction.

The gaze the glances my way that tell me you are mine,
Our own Shakespearean romance to stand the test of time.
The rain keeps falling but we dont seem to mind,
As long as your in my arms life is so sublime.

Stand by me, i will hold you close with such emotion,
We will see, the strength we share and this attraction.
Stand by me, i will hold you close with such emotion,
Never leave, one touch can start a chain reaction.
Last edited by GodsDrumz at Jul 7, 2011,
#2
I'm suprised I'm the first person to comment on this because its really good.

It flows really well, the lyrics aren't to cliche or predictable.

I would quite happily perfrom this song live (if I'd have written it) and I reckon it would be well recieved.

If you have a Girlfriend this will definitely get you major points, if you don't well, this just might help solve it.

10/10 in my opinion, cant fault it. well done
#3
Wow. I would love to hear a recorded version of it. This is top quality stuff for sure
#4
I agree with the others. A recorded version would be really nice.
#5
This was really cutesy, and its simplicity added to its effectiveness. It's nothing truly groundbreaking, even rife with clichés, but this kind of song doesn't need to be at all. It just puts a smile on your face (no joke), I really enjoyed it. Good job.


#6
Awesome!!! thanks guys :P i have the recorded version up now, its under my Mp3's on my profile, check it out and give me some feedback. Thanks for all the posative feedback, a major confidence boost for sure
Last edited by GodsDrumz at Jul 8, 2011,