#1
The Sickness



I say to myself I will be alright

But unknowingly I am getting sicker

Everything around me is okay

But the haze in my head is getting thicker

Please oh please god what do I do

I’m oblivious to the sickness

I can’t get through



Now is the time to act

I need to make myself get back on track

I need all the help, will you just pick

Will you hurry up, cuz I am sick

THE SICKNESS!!!

THE SICKNESS!!!



I can feel my rage boiling up inside

Please oh please I can no longer hide

It’s coming out, I’m no longer myself

Just calm down, or I’ll unleash this hell



(solo)



Now is the time to act

I need to make myself get back on track

I need all the help, will you just pick

Will you hurry up, cuz I am sick

THE SICKNESS!!!

THE SICKNESS!!!



my first song

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#2
your first?....!!!....Then continue my friend twas rather good, id give you more feedback but was rather self explanatory and to the point, kudos
#5
Doesn't really stand out, but generally good flow, and there are absolutely zero lines that made me cringe. The only thing I'd do is get rid of the phrase "the sickness" altogether - change the title and find another lyric, because people are going to think of that Disturbed song. You could even just call it "Sickness" and change the line to "THIS SICKNESS" and it would be perfectly fine.