#1
Hey guys, I wrote a new song and i think it turned out quite well but I'd like your opinion Keep in mind this was a cell phone recording.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uQtETDT1wUo&feature=related

As always C4C, just leave me a link!


Ps. if you have time can your crit this one as well?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tdnLOT2hMnI&feature=related

Edit: It's supposed to have lyrics but I dont sing so keep that in mind
2/17/08 Kosova's independence!!!
Last edited by zbest at Jul 9, 2011,
#2
zbest,
I wasn't sure if the sound of the rain was background noise while you recorded, or added on purpose; either way it makes the recording more interesting (I later concluded you added it). It's a bit repetitive in spots, but that is often hard to avoid in instrumentals. If it were me, I would have made it shorter, or added vocals. I still like it overall. Playing could be tighter in some places. I like the melodies. I suggest adding drums or playing to a (not to be audible in the recording) metronome to help on the timing. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1456385
#4
Dude thats actually pretty cool lmao, I didnt know guitarpro could sound that good. What version do you have? and it's got awesome rhythm and a hard hitting riff but you gotta record thos one live man. as for my song, I should have mentioned that its supposed to have lyrics but I can't sing so until I get a singer its gotta stay at this :/
2/17/08 Kosova's independence!!!