#1
Whats up everyone. I'm not too big into rap, but there are certain artists which I appreciate for their lyricism and style. I'm a fairly well rounded musician, predominately a guitarist, but I've only ever written lyrics for a couple rock songs before and this was my first attempt at writing a rap song altogether.

I called it "We Are". All the vocals are me, I made the whole beat with my yamaha djx synth and reason. Mixed in reaper.

All comments and critique welcome - c4c just leave a link.

Thanks!

(song is located on my soundcloud linked in my signature)
#3
The lyrics are cool, but the tone is lacking. It needs more confidence and the voice should be lower, especially in the beginning. It gets better as it progresses though.