Whats up everyone. I'm not too big into rap, but there are certain artists which I appreciate for their lyricism and style. I'm a fairly well rounded musician, predominately a guitarist, but I've only ever written lyrics for a couple rock songs before and this was my first attempt at writing a rap song altogether.

I called it "We Are". All the vocals are me, I made the whole beat with my yamaha djx synth and reason. Mixed in reaper.

All comments and critique welcome - c4c just leave a link.


(song is located on my soundcloud linked in my signature)
The lyrics are cool, but the tone is lacking. It needs more confidence and the voice should be lower, especially in the beginning. It gets better as it progresses though.