#2
That was just beautiful, I didn't find any part of it boring and I feel like the breakdown slowed the song down well enough for the chilly acoustic part, which then turns into this epic chord and melody part which has a really amazing feeling to it. It kept me interested throughout the whole song and it's definitely a song I will listen to more later
Some parts are repeated a little much, but not enough that vocals can't do them justice anyway

If you have anything to say about my song at https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1459509
I would very much appreciate it
#3
Really good song, more post hardcore than metalcore though I think, you do yourself a disservice by calling it metalcore.
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#6
Quote by herby190
I don't really understand why you have a separate track for the bass drum.


I have to agree, that annoyed the **** out of me.
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#7
Thanks for all the kind words guys I'm feeling really good about the song after all of the comments, haha. I'm pretty new to writing drums in guitar pro, and I find it MUCH easier to write when I separate the two tracks. I realize it can be done in one, but I like to write them separately! I will definitely C4C :3