#1
Hy, I've been playing for almost two years now and I wrote this song about three months ago. It's the first song I've ever written and I was hoping that I could get some feedback and constructive criticism so that I can make improvements on this piece and others that I may write. Thanks for listening.
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Song 1.gp5
#2
I like it, a little, it sounds a bit cliched, like a begginer has written it, which you have. I was no better when i started writing. The solo's pretty good. On my previous comment i would try to sound less obvious, if you know what i mean.
#3
What do I use to listen too it?
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