#1
I had 2 riffs(intro and chorus), so I decided to change the key of the intro to fit in, made up a verse riff, and added my chorus riff in there.

The pre-chorus part I think is the best part in there, but I wanna see what you guys think.

Recording isn't the best as it was just for the hell of it in one take.

http://soundcloud.com/viktorkry/riff

gp5 file for a better view.
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