#2
The piano riff is very good. The guitar gives it a very "crying" feel, but sometimes it sounds like it is slightly out of tune. I'm not into lo-fi, so I'm not sure if the vocals are supposed to not be heard. But I think it would be nice to make it easier to hear. Not too clear, it's nice to keep a little secret, it can just be too much, since it will make the song way too repetitive. I think Kid A - Radiohead shows quite nicely how much you should hide your voice. Maybe a tad more could work out though.

Great job overall!

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1460222

- Huliheaden
#3
With Lo-fi things like quality sound and perfection are thrown out. If you listen to musicians like John Frusciante, Beck, or early Modest Mouse you'll understand what I mean. It's easier when you don't have to focus on making it perfect for anybody but yourself lol

ALSO as per why my vocals are hard to hear, is cause I wanted to to make it seem more like an old TV sound... Also I hate my lyrics, so I prefer to use them in more of an instrumental way lol
Fair enough.
Last edited by AfroRockerMike at Jul 12, 2011,
#4
woah that's really trippy LOL
especially the image in the youtube video- i was staring at it while the music was playing and i felt like i was dreaming haha.

nice concept you have there, and i especially loved the bass.
the fuzzy vocals add a really nice touch that adds to the lo-fi atmosphere.
overall nice and simple track.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27650205#post27650205
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#5
Thanks for criticing my stuff..


YEah, sounds great. Piano riff sounded great throughout it and the guitar over the top sound so sweet. Good job on that! there is a few notes on your guitar that you could of added a bit more vibrato to or something... but sounded great!..

liked the voice, like the guy above says, maybe make it a tiny bit more clear, but not too much, it sounds really good already! just make it not sound so repetative by clearing it up a biit..
#9
Sorry to disappoint you guys, but I'm not asking for your advice on fixing it, It's totally done and perfect lol I was just wondering what YOU guys thought (Good, bad, not for me, too lo-fi, not lo-fi enough) I'm fairly confident in my sound, so if you don't get it... Well that's the point of music lol
Fair enough.