#1
Very poppy, not my usual style. Let me know what you think. Sorry the mix is lame.

http://kerryritter.com/area41/remote_demovox.mp3
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#2
I was pretty hooked from the start. I understand it's not your usual style. But I enjoyed it. I was quite relieved that it wasn't a poppy love song. I've grown to hate those lol. The chord progression is pretty standard, but no need to be complex all the time. All in all good job. The mix is not too too bad, it's definitely demo quality. Mind checking out my music? This is just some rough videos I threw together while writing songs for an acoustic demo.

http://www.youtube.com/user/SatellitesAndStarsHQ?feature=mhee
#3
I'll hit those up tomorrow, thanks for your thoughts!
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for fans of...

Motion City Soundtrack, Get Up Kids, Jimmy Eat World, Transit, Brand New, Dashboard Confessional, Early November, Fall Out Boy, Jawbreaker, Polar Bear Club, The Story So Far, the Wonder Years, Something Corporate.
#4
THIS is how pop(py) songs should sound be like! We need more of these. When you octave (I think) you really had me. Pretty good recording quality too. What is your usual style?

Great job. I can't find anything to say for you to improve on, considering this is a demo and the mix and volume levels aren't that important.

If you have the time, I'd appreciate if you'd check out this:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1460889
Last edited by Huliheaden at Jul 14, 2011,