An unfinished song about revenge and the feelings you get from it that I'm working on.

I'm just looking for someone to tell me it's horrible so I can stop writing it.

Revenge for a lumped problem,
a memory soon to be forgotten.
One problems of life given for free.

The simplicity of human guilt
Quilted upon a well made figure,
Doubles the pain for thee

Retaliation turns into consequences.
The outcome is your despair.
The feelings are yours to keep.
For revenge is just coordinated hate.

Unsympathetic is for the strong,
Emotions are tricked for your fate,
Because sympathy is for the weak.

Reasons build in your head.
thoughts shrilling your insides,
Become yours to tweak.