#1
These clouds are much
too heavy for me
this ocean's
too deep to breathe

So I won't,
I won't,
I won't

I hope you know,
you know,
you know

That no matter how I beg,
no matter how I plead
I'll gladly,
I'll gladly

No matter just how loud
we find out I can scream
Just let me
just let me drown

This change in weather
is finally getting to me
and I'm thinking
that I can't take this heat

So I won't,
I won't,
I won't

As long as you know,
you know,
you know

That no matter how I beg,
no matter how I plead
I'll gladly,
I'll gladly

No matter just how loud
we find out I can scream
Just let me
just let me drown

I never learned to conquer fears
I never made my intentions clear
I guess I hoped you'd figure out
my doubts

I never learned to conquer fears
I still dream of broken mirrors
I guess my mind's still at sea
sailing on the breeze

No matter how I beg,
no matter how I plead
I'll gladly,
I'll gladly

No matter just how loud
we find out I can scream
Just let me
just let me drown

I'll gladly,
I'll gladly drown


I've finally,
I've finally found bliss

Just let me,
just let me drown in this
#2
Awesome.
You deserve a cookie.
&soyeah
:LedgeLovesLefty
What doesn't kill you...usually succeeds in a second attempt. -Mr. Krabs
The key to happiness is lowered expectations. -Chuckie Finster

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#3
Some of the repetition irritated me, which is strange because I use repetition liberally in my own work. A lot of it felt unnecessary because you were repeating such simple words that rather than add impact, it just got annoying to read.

Other than that, this was a great read.