#1
Hey. It's me.

This is a song I wrote for my band, Radiochain. It's going to be a punk song. It should sound, strangely, similar to this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AOTjtt9de9A

At least the chorus sounds totally different than this song's.

Anyway, the last line in the last chorus, "All these lies" is yelled like at 2:49 of this song.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-zAu8eiJ2XQ

Also, sorry it's in caps, but that's just how I wrote it and I just cut and pasted it


LIES


VERSE 1:

SEE YOU STANDING THERE, COULD BE AN ILLUSION
SIMPLY SILHOUETTE IN THE DISTANCE
I HEAR DIFFERENT VOICES, CAUSING MY CONFUSION
I CAN BARELY COMPREHEND MY EXISTANCE

WITH YOU
SITTING CALMLY, WHILE YOU'RE
LYING SOFTLY
THROUGH YOUR TEETH

AND I
PIECE TOGETHER, UNDER
ALL THIS PRESSURE
THAT YOU'RE LYING TO ME


CHORUS:

STARE INTO THE MIRROR
GETTING NEARER
TO THE PRIZE

DON'T KNOW WHAT I GOT INTO
I CAN'T EVEN SEE YOU THROUGH
ALL THESE LIES


ALL THESE LIES

ALL THESE LIES

ALL THESE LIES

ALL THESE LIES


VERSE 2:

SEE ME STANDING HERE, I'M NOT AN ILLUSION
SIMPLY HERE TO PUT MY DISTANCE
I CAN HEAR YOUR VOICE, IT'S CAUSING MY CONFUSION
I CAN BARELY COMPREHEND MY EXISTANCE

WITH YOU
SITTING CALMLY, WHILE YOU'RE
LYING SOFTLY
THROUGH YOUR TEETH

AND I
PIECE TOGETHER, UNDER
ALL THIS PRESSURE
THAT YOU'RE LYING TO ME


CHORUS:

STARE INTO THE MIRROR
GETTING NEARER
TO THE PRIZE

DON'T KNOW WHAT I GOT INTO
I CAN'T EVEN SEE YOU THROUGH
ALL THESE LIES


ALL THESE LIES

ALL THESE LIES

ALL THESE LIES

ALL THESE LIES


[GUITAR SOLO (MUSICMAN14579 PLAYING)]


BRIDGE: [EDITED]

TRUTH CONCEALED BY LIES
I CAN SEE IT IN YOUR EYES
YOU WAIT FOR RESPONSE
I'M AT A LOSS OF WORDS


CHORUS:

STARE INTO THE MIRROR
GETTING NEARER
TO THE PRIZE

DON'T KNOW WHAT I GOT INTO
I CAN'T EVEN SEE YOU THROUGH
ALL THESE LIES


ALL THESE LIES

ALL THESE LIES

ALL THESE LIES

ALL THESE LIES
Last edited by gateway01 at Jul 29, 2011,
#7
The way, direction, or position in which something lies..Deception includes the range of means whereby people may be mislead. The most evident of these is lying. But it also includes withholding information which the person might find of immediate significance, as well as misleading the person into some alternative belief, or reinforcing such a belief. Then there are the more marginal forms of deception, such as evasion, euphemism and exaggeration; and the often unconscious forms of deception (without intention to mislead), such as the subtle changes of subject, the disguises, the gestures leading astray, and silence and inaction.
#8
Thanks for all the feedback!

@josefpeter...I'm not sure what you're implying...

Also. I changed the Bridge. Now it goes like this, and unlike the rest of the song, it's sort of a softer part with a clean guitar sound.

TRUTH CONCEALED BY LIES
I CAN SEE IT IN YOUR EYES
YOU WAIT FOR RESPONSE
I'M AT A LOSS OF WORDS