Hello guitar players,

I play guitar by 1 and half years, I've a band with some friends and I trying to make some original songs so we can play along, but they haven't any experience so I need your help.

The songs:

1 - Metalcore Song
Download Guitar Pro: http://www.easy-share.com/1916685951/Metalcore%20Song.gp5
Influences: Parkway Drive, A Day To Remember, Dancing With The Enemy

2 - Another Song About Something Wrong
Download Guitar Pro: http://www.easy-share.com/1916685961/Another Song About Something Wrong.gp5
Influences: The Shower Scene - For What It's Worth (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6tHhcDZ_FrE)

3 - Memories
Download Guitar Pro: http://www.easy-share.com/1916685971/Memories.gp5
Influences: Saosin, Circa Survive, Emarosa, Conditions, etc.

(I can send songs by email or host then anywhere else, just pm me for that.)

I need some opinions and some help to finish all the songs so I can get a 3/4 minutes cool song. Lyrics and/or vocals ideias are welcome too.

Please help me. Keep rocking \m/
don't really have an answer for you on helping with the songs, but i dled the metalcore one and it sounds sweet u got a good thing going
You can attach song files on this site, just so you know. It's at the bottom when making a post