#1
Here are some lyrics i've been working on and i was wondering if could get an opinion on any of them.

1. Here We Go Again. Pretty standard she's a bitch punk rock song

Chorus
Here we go again
Following the same old trend
Here we go again
How can you say, you were my friend
Here we go again
Chasing down another dead end
Here we go again
Here we go again

Well I never thought it'd be as hard as this
But now i can see something's amiss
And it can’t just be a coincidence
That there's no more bliss in ignorance

I'm in so deep I can barely breath
how it got like this i can't belive
And the only thing that isn’t clear
Is what the **** we’re doing here

verse 2

times may change and days may pass
but this was never built to last
tried our best and our best won't do
when it comes to me and you

And you really can't deny it
When I said it before you wouldn’t buy it
You just said that things would change
But everything still seems the same

Chorus


I’ve gave my all but you wanted more
I'm doing now what i should have before
And now you sit and wonder why
There’s no one left to hear you cry


2.No Title yet. Very Fast rapid delivery style here, sort of Subteranean Homesick Blues-ish

wake up 3pm
get out of bed and start again
another day stuck at home
doing nothing on your own
can't take another day
you've got to get away
then you fall back in your seat
resign yourself to your defeat
look for a job in the wanted pages
hit the town and drink your wages
but thats just life in this old town
picks you up then drops you down


work and work and work some more
if you don't well there's the door
grab the money and fake a smile
tell your self it's just for a while
that you've got to make ends meet
bills to pay and dates to keep
watch the clock tick away
kill yourself day by day
never notice never care
that you're running out of days to spare
but that's just life in this in this old town
picks you up then drops you down


wake up one day you'll find
20 years you've got behind
years that pass seem like days
your younger years lost in a haze
now you've got a house of your own
with a wife two kids and a loan
so many things you said you'd do
lost in the years that you just blew
but don't do anything just sit and save
from the cradle to the grave
but thats just life in this old town
picks you up just to drop you down


Chorus
Don't stop never stop never stop untill you drop
Don't stop never stop never stop cause this is all you got


3.Million Miles. Rock Anthem/Ballad, very oasis inspired.
a million miles away from home
and i don't know which way to go
or why or how or where or when will i get there at LL

but it doesn't matter much to me
becuase all i ever want to be
is somewhere very far away a million miles from here

like a rolling stone i go
though blackest night and whitest snow
searching with my tired eyes looking for what i can't find

and if i pass it by one day
i know that it'll be ok
i have lots of other things to find so much to do so little time

a million miles away from home
and i don't know where i want to go
or why or how or where or when will i get there

days will come and days will pass
and nothings ever built to last
and even if it's come and gone, then i'll still carry on

chorus
iiiiiiiii can't find my waaaayyy hommmeee


Be as brutal as you want, the only way i can get better is by having the bad stuff torn to pieces.
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#2
I'm fine with the lyrics of those songs (even though they won't win any lyric writing awards, they are still serviceable as long as you have a good hook to drive them home with) with the exception of the last one, which is just one big collection of cliches and seems rather forced. So that one needs a total rewrite.

Keep plugging away and good luck.
#3
Yeah i agree, thanks for the review. Now back to the drawing board.
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