#1
Hey UG community, I made this recording today and it's a rough sketch i quickly threw together today to see what people thought of it so far. It's not mixed so some guitars are kinda off and I'm pretty sick so the vocals are off in some parts I'm aware haha. So please give it a listen and I want to know your honest opinion on this song and all constructive criticism is gladly welcomed. Sum up of excuses: I've got a decent cold and I did it quick because it isn't a big deal yet So thanks for the looks and I will C4C

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/TheSmashing/

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#3
I don't really enjoy the genre but I enjoyed the pre-chorus and chorus. The verse after the first chorus is full of cliches and has been used a bit too much. As far as music goes, it's a perfect draft and the rift is pretty catchy.
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